20.12.15

Find mistakes and correct them    31, 43 groups
I hope you remember that during our last lesson you were working on a little unusual task. You had to write a short essay using some guidance and samples. I have checked your essays and must admit that about 90% of students coped with the task very well. In your works there are all necessary paragraphs and linking words, the topics are well covered but there are some grammar mistakes. Look for mistakes or errors, correct them and write your variant of the sentence. 
Let’s see if you can find and correct them.
You needn't correct all the sentences! Two or three will be enough. Skip the sentences you don’t want to correct. Use the special form for giving your answers.
Form for the 31 group
Look through all the sentences before using the form for correcting

43 group.            The essay “Why to enter this university?”
1.      I must make a serious decision where to study enter.
2.      I don’t know exactly where I will trained.
3.      In this year we will enter to university.
4.      I want to work in the technical field and do your best to good employees.
5.      KPI is a best technical university in Ukraine.
6.      Choose the right profession is very important in our lives.
7.      But the disadvantege is that expensive flat in the capital.
8.      It is not a problem as for me.
9.      I think it is most prestige university in Ukraine.
10.  I advice you to enter this university and you will have a quality education and a lot of fun.
11.  One like the capital the other want to get away from it.
12.  For example – new experiences, career preparation.
13.  After graduating it will be easy to find work.

31 group.            The essay “Why is it good to live in Slavutych”
  1. It also very quiet and pretty.
  2. Our streets illuminated not very well but it can be romantic sometimes.
  3. All people know each other and ready help with any problems.
  4. Ukraine is a best country in the world.
  5. Our town is clean and his citizens are helpful, friendly and kind.
  6. It is also safe for people to live because we have low criminal rates.
  7. I don’t really like live in Slavytuch.
  8. All people who live here know history of yourselves town.
  9. Slavytuch had fine park where parents with children can lead excellent time.

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